FOOD AND EMOJI’S
Hi My Name is Abby and I’m going to tell you a story which goes 2 seconds back.
A group of friends went into 3 different shops the Ice-cream store, a candy store and a Bakery store. I will tell you who went in where.A girl called Nikita with light and dark hair went into a Bakery store and became cake.
A girl called Abby with light hair went into a Ice-Cream store and became Coco.A girl called Mia with dark hair went into a Candy store and became Lolly.
There are 2 queens in this story the Sweet Queen and Sour Queen. The Sweet Queen lives in a nice white castle made out of candy floss and sugar. The Sour Queen lives in a evil black castle made out of crunchy bars and Licorice. The Sour Queen is planning to take over the Candy store then the sweet castle. The Sour Queen is the Sweet Queens EVIL SISTER!!!!! So the Sour Queen Commanded the Gummy Bears to take her to the Candy Store the Gummy bears obeyed. But there was one gummy bear who you will meet next he he.
The problem is that one of the Gummy bears called lolly didn’t like the sour queen and ran away till she meets a chocolate bar called Coco who is me. Soon we found out we both wanted to know how to get out of this food wonderland. A few hours later they meet a cake called Cake who has the same problem. A Day later from walking they find out that in the real world they are BFFS!!!!!!!!!!
Once the Sour Queen took over the candy store she realised Lolly was GONE!!!! The sour queen made all her guards look for her luckily they were pretty far away till they see a PUG EATING A Chicken no a Chicken nugget who was screaming help me this Pug is called Maddie She’s your BFF so save me and I will take you to emo no uh the real world just save me. Coco takes no thoughts and says OK then saves the chicken nugget and gives the Pug the Sour Queen who Coco picked up on the way.
WHAT we aren't in the real world we are in a emoji land. Mia was the heart eye emoji, Nikita was the Demon emoji, Abby was the Poop Emoji and Maddie was the Pug eating a Chicken nugget emoji. Then they get sucked in a Void called CODY!!!!!!!!
They are back home safe and sound they think.
DUN DUN DUN
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Abby
ReplyDeleteI love this blog post because it is adventurous and because it has emoji s and that is good because I love emoji s and used real people.are the people you used your friends? next time can you please tell us what dun dun dun means.
Kia Ora Abby!
ReplyDeleteI'm Hannah from Grey Main Schools Mamaku 1.
I really enjoyed reading the story, it was very creative!I like the way it ended, it made me want read the continued story! Are you going to write another story to continue it?
Next time maybe try to add more punctuation like full stops, commas, and speech marks. Also reread your writing and make sure it makes sense!
This writing reminds me of my free writing story 'Kira-Kira and the drowning town'. It was also about food but it was about foods that talk in puns. I haven't finished it yet but I hope I will soon!
Keep up the good work Abby!
Hannah
Grey Main School
Kia Ora Abby, my name is Kyra in Mamaku 1 , Grey Main School!
ReplyDeleteI like this post about Candy & Emoji's because I love candy and emoji's. I also liked it because the story was quite adventurous and funny. How long did it take you to write it?
This reminds of writing a story called Sandy the Sheepfox, I know, the title is weird but it is about a Fennec fox that is found on cold night in the desert by a farmer, petrified by a big black dog, scared by a rooster named Smarty and much more......
Maybe next time you could add some images for the characters or for the places. You could also think about how you format your writing (color of writing and size of text).
Miharo (Amazing in Te reo maori) work!
From Kyra, Term 2, 2017. If you want to visit my blog, click on my name!