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Wednesday, May 24, 2017

Tigers!!!!!!



This is My Third Piece of free writing.
This is about Tigers If you go to my older posts you will see the Doc version of it.
I hope you enjoy.
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12 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 26, 2017 at 9:34 AM

    Hi Abby, its Jasmine here from Mamaku 1 at grey main school. Wow I loved how you said to stop cutting down trees so we don't wreck the tigers home. Next time you could add more information on the animal. Did you like this activity?

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    1. AnonymousJune 21, 2017 at 9:16 AM

      Hi Jasmine, Next time I will add more information. This wasn't a activity I just wanted to do it because tigers are my favorite animal.

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  2. UnknownMay 26, 2017 at 9:37 AM

    hi Abby its Josh from Grey Main School. I can't see the writing on the 4th slide. can you fix it please. do you like tigers? next time you can please put more info. by from Josh.

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    1. AnonymousJune 21, 2017 at 9:14 AM

      Hi Josh, If you want to see what it says on the 4th slide put it on full screen.

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  3. UnknownMay 26, 2017 at 9:43 AM

    Kia Ora Abby it is Allie from Grey Main School I really like this post about tigers you have put lots of people hate tigers so they want to kill them and when hey die it is sad because thirs is poeple that do care.next time you should get a book about tigers.?

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    1. AnonymousJune 21, 2017 at 9:21 AM

      Hi Allie, Your idea is really good next time will put it in.

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  4. UnknownMay 26, 2017 at 9:48 AM

    Kia Ora Abby My name Is Levi C from grey Main school I like how your telling me about your tigers comment maybe next time you could work on some more captal

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    1. AnonymousJune 21, 2017 at 9:28 AM

      Hi Levi, If I have any spare time I will edit it and put in the capitals.

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  5. UnknownMay 26, 2017 at 10:04 AM

    Hi Abby its Logan from Grey Main School. It is Kohl
    Becky it is a tiger.

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  6. PaytonMay 26, 2017 at 2:21 PM

    Hi there my payton and i go to kawakawa primary school i really liked you tiger slide it made me think of going to the zoo and see tigers have you thought about making it as a video if you would like to see my learning this is my blog http://kpspaytonm.blogspot.co.nz/

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    1. AnonymousJune 21, 2017 at 9:29 AM

      Hi Payton, I might do another version of it and make it into a video.

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  7. AnonymousJune 27, 2017 at 12:53 PM

    Hi Abby,
    My name is Mikaela and I'm a year 6 student at St.Bernadette's School. I was really interested reading your slide show because it had some amazing facts, e.g. it is estimated that there are 3200 tigers left in the wild. Maybe next time you could cheek your punctuation. What website did you get all the information from ?

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